humerous
The plot had potential, was well executed, a bit more exageration would definitely emphasise the humour. I laughed when he started crying, it was a bit lame, though i still enjoyed it. Good work, and I look forward to Hewitt, I didn't get to finish it, let's just hope Casper gets back from holiday soon ey? =D
cheers
humerous
The title of this flash brought about my attention... only to find the infamous strawberry clock.
I find this cartoon hilarious... perhaps for the lack of dialog and sense of fact that it was intentional. B all the way...
thanks!
Patrick
Yeah, my biggest problem was I started it with 30 fps. So I got bad reviews. Its sort of a take off Newgrounds is my Bee-otch. I made it as a tribute to a rather well created character of Newgrounds.
freakingly amused
ive checked your website, very impressive. To me, the trailers style is somewhat marvel/johny quest based, which I find "freakingly amusing".
One issue I have, which isn't much of a big deal at all, is what I have received from this trailer is about Cub the Go-Man who... goes a lot... who runs and jumps around the city as if it were his own backyard playground. Perhaps this is a good excuse to show off your animation potential... but you are aiming for proffessional quality in your cartoons, show more depth and proffessionalism in your plots! A guy that runs around the city a lot does not interest me one bit. I did however like the character designs, very sharp I may say.
A question if you will respond to my review... do you use a tablet? and how do you animate them smoothly through frame by frame, I've examined each individual frame, is there a particular method you use? you are good!
Other than that, I will be looking at your web for further updates, I am interested to see how it pans out.
thanks.
Patrick
Excellent! fine detail...
a great composition and addition to the bitey series... there's really no point on expanding my review any further as we all know you've topped it off once again...
to Carlos_Restrepo...
True that stunning art isn't the answer to flash, but your next statement contradicted you're first... I am a viewer of newgrounds... and I see exactly what you see too...
I guess you're simply a perfectionist who says... do a good job or don't do it at all (failure)... I say, good on you Adam for doing you're best... even though some people are looking for perfection... it's not exactly a great way to approach flash animation, or anything at all in general...
Here is a tip for you Carlose... look at the glass of water half full, not half empty.
God bless :)
Patrick.
was ok, not great.
extremely cliched with anime in general, but that's what NG desires, what can I say, you've hit your target audience.
The graphics... can do with more improvement, more variety in your animation rather than tweening alone would be nice nextime.
The music fit with the animation.... slow and boring. Nah I do like these genres... but your plot was corny, japansy, and again... long and boring.
As for the style, nice attempt, I encourage you in fact to persue animation to a deeper level.
Anime has come a long way, but the plot, the stories I watch is overdone the majority of the time. Classic example... steamboy, waste of my time. 11 years in the making, but the worst plot i have ever seen in the history of anime.
So, while we are in this century... please be original, and alawys search for more concepts that will, not so much satisfy your audience, but will satisfy what you stand up for, people will appreciate you for that aswell.
God bless,
Patrick.
was ok
graphics a 5, although simplification does have its unique style, I think it's a sad excuse for people who can't draw. However I am much grateful of your talents.
the style itself is cliched, a sad anime boy who regrets to tell of his feelings, with his utterly rediculous lack of confidence lol. :) Its good though, that you are studying these styles, because I used to be there.
The sound was good for the animation, points for that, the song itself... well, don't stop trying!
Violence, a 10, simply because there is no violence, youve got my 10 for it.
the rest are N/A
weldone on this animation, who ever says this is bad, or is dull, needs to understand the depth of an artists journey, that we show our talents because of who we were made to be, Children of God.
Mighty Blessing to you ForestXion...
P.S you live in the lost woods? give me a break. wow you like sleeping too... gee we should be best mates. :)
I love this kind of reviews =P and i agree with you. Thanks for all
P.S 1.- lol >.>
2.- right on mate !
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the guy really needs God to bless him with a new revelation about the Bible. And yes, Jesus loves you has given you this talent, use it wisely dude, it sounds pansy perhaps, but I have a point right?
And so be it.
was ok.
I think people exagerate. sad story yes, and you spelt farewell incorectly :)
God bless!
Patrick.
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